2. Feedback reflection: The feedback from my last elevator pitch was all positive, which was awesome but it made it difficult for me to find many areas to change in my pitch this time around. A similar issue to what I had last time. Some of my favorite aspects of the feedback were when Ashitka said that my second elevator pitch was much improved because of how much more confident I was. I was really glad this came through because I tried especially hard the second time around to have my pitch well memorized since I changed it a lot from the original. I also really enjoyed Pimchanok’s comment about how good she though my hook was!
3. Changes made based on feedback: As I mentioned, because of the lack of constructive criticism there wasn’t much I could change based on the feedback I received. However, there was one minor change that I decided to implement in which I changed the incentive from one student to have graduate cubicle access to three students so that more people would download and use the Hotspot app.
Hi, Nicolette,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. It’s always great every time. I think having three people to use the hotspot for the application would be great, but you have to becareful about you revenue. I think your solution will benefit lots of student, not only UF’s students, but also the other college students in the future when your application is more successful. Overall, you did a great on this assignment. Well done!
Hello Nicolette,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on the pitch! I really liked the hook and your overall pitch seems polished and complete. I liked how you incorporated an incentive and the way you presented your entire idea was very smart. Like I mentioned previously as well, you seem so much more confident than how you presented your first pitch. I can’t wait to use your app!
Hello Nicolette,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on this assignment. As in the past your pitch was well done. I think you capitalized on the opportunity to present the incentive that comes with using yout product. Also you mentioned in your review that you are more confident and that shows throughout your pitch. Keep up the good work.